New Writers’ Scheme
I was at my desk during the early hours of 2 January to ensure that my email application for a place on the New Writers’ Scheme run by the Romantic Novelists’ Association was accepted. The scheme is oversubscribed every year, so now that I have my confirmation pack, I finally feel like a member. My task until the end of August is to redraft the manuscript of my first novel ready for assessment.
Manipulation has been languishing in a drawer while I’ve been occupied with other writing and it’s been reassuring to return to the characters I first created in 2009. (Further details of the story can be found under the ‘manuscripts’ tab.) I have much work to do as feedback from critical friends has identified weaknesses:
- the language of the novel needs to be more adventurous
- the characters and the romance require sympathetic attention
- the location (Outback Australia) should be fully explored
When the RNA receive my manuscript, a reader will be appointed to review the entire work and it may be referred to a second reader, as a possible pathway to publication. However, it’s more likely that the work will be returned with suggestions for further improvements. Should this happen, Katie Fforde, President of the RNA, advises against feeling downcast for too long and to make the most of the guidance offered. She says, ‘a rule of thumb is, if your reader thinks something needs changing it probably does’.
Criticism is sometimes hard to accept and tenacity is required to remain focused and confident that you have the skills to improve the work to a publishable standard. Gruelling though it may be, critical reviews often provide the right advice to move your writing onto the next level. If you’re interested in receiving support for a novel that you’re working on, (it doesn’t have to be romance, as with the RNA scheme) it may be worth entering the Adventures in Fiction competition where the winner of the Spotlight First Page will be offered a mentoring package and other input and support. You’ll have to be quick as the deadline is 14 February 2012 and the cost is £16.
#FridayFlash: Stone
The dining room is laid with paper cloths and napkins. In my pocket, the stone slips between my fingers, the surface smooth and cold. I found it in the garden as I shuffled along the path. I think of Laura and her mellow gaze, her eyes watching my mouth as she tries to understand the words that I dribble. I place the distorted heart on the table where she sits, a stone love letter.
This 75-word short story (including title) was first published by Paragraph Planet, 23 January 2012. Website: http://www.paragraphplanet.com
Looking through the window: ideas for writing
I live in Dorchester, the county town of Dorset. This is one of the views from my house. Even on a winter’s day the outlook is, well, pleasing. Fortunately, the window in the study is set too high in the wall to cause a distraction when I’m writing at my desk. But it is lovely to stare at the water meadows whenever I’m taking a break. Thomas Hardy describes the town in The Mayor of Casterbridge as standing, ‘clean-cut and distinct, like a cheeseboard on a green table-cloth’. I imagine it is this view to the north that is the cloth.
If I turn my head to the right, the view is completely different. Look carefully and you’ll notice the razor wire on top of the wall. This is Dorchester Prison, a Victorian building that holds 250 male prisoners: half on remand, the other half convicted prisoners, including some serving life prison sentences.
With two such different views, looking through the window always helps in generating ideas for writing. While the country views assist with the description of place, it’s looking at the prison that pricks my curiosity. In the summer I can hear shouts as the prisoners communicate through the open windows of their cells. And walking through the town, the prison officers are distinctive in their black uniforms. When I tell people I live next door to a prison, they wonder why I haven’t taken up crime writing. It’s never too late, I think.
Should libraries charge reading groups for book loans?
Unlike many reading groups (where members purchase a copy of the book to discuss) in Dorset we are fortunate to have the support of the library service. Book groups in the county can reserve up to twelve copies of available books (there is a list of titles to select from – all texts are over a year old) and the books are loaned for an extended period of eight weeks. Sets of books are collected from a local branch although due to the County Council funding cuts there are considerably fewer libraries than previously.
Enquiries were recently made to all 360 reading groups in Dorset to ask whether members would be willing to make a voluntary financial contribution for this service. 110 reading groups responded to the consultation with 83% indicating that they would be prepared to make a donation. In my reading group much discussion continues. While the service is excellent, there is a concern that donations may subsidise other aspects of the library service rather than being a dedicated support for reading groups. There may also be a review of income generated by voluntary contributions to consider whether a set fee should be applied. Does this lead us along the slippery path of requiring payment for any book loan? Perhaps this is an over-reaction but I’d be interested in hearing your views. Please use the comments box to contribute to the discussion.
Moving forward: writing groups
I love a fresh start and now that the tree is down, the cards put away and the bottles are in the recycling, I’m ready to greet 2012 with my first post of the year. Thank you for following me and I hope that I’ll be able to generate discussion about books and writing. In this post, I’m thinking about writing groups.
Receiving feedback on written work is always valuable. Typos alone are difficult to spot and being confident that you’ve met the needs of your reader is never easy. That’s when the advice of a critical friend is particularly helpful. Presenting work for comment can be a daunting experience but one that may identify strengths and areas for development. Writing groups are an excellent way to share work, particularly when there is strong leadership/facilitation and committed members who ensure that participants enjoy a supportive environment. If I were able to have an ideal group, it would include the following:
- 4-6 people, including some experienced writers
- A focus either on poetry or prose
- Monthly scheduled meetings
- Opportunities for critical feedback, writing activities and tasks
- A comfortable venue with access to refreshments
Indeed, my ideal is similar to the writing group I currently attend but it’s not always easy to find a group that works for you. As an alternative, you might like to consider starting your own group, but if you go down this route, it is worth ensuring that the boundaries are clear:
- Develop terms of reference that identify what the group hopes to achieve, how the group will operate, ground rules
- Be clear about the roles and responsibilities for participants, facilitators/group leaders
- Have an understanding of group dynamics
Alternatively, it’s worth considering an on-line forum. My New Year Resolution is to showcase an example of my writing each month on this blog. By linking the post to the #fridayflash community, I increase my visibility as a writer and receive feedback on my work. It’s also a fun way to meet other writers, read their work and share experiences. If you’re interested in becoming part of an on-line writing community, have a think about joining this group.
Looking ahead…
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For some playful writing ideas, please see Robert McCrum’s Fifty things I’ve learnt about literary life.
For a literary TV treat, don’t forget to watch Great Expectations on BBC1 at 9pm on 27,28 and 29 December.
My blog during 2012, will include:
- an interview with Louisa Adjoa Parker as she moves from published poetry into writing her first novel
- a focus on contemporary writers taking inspiration from living in Dorset
- Thomas Hardy in Dorchester
What are your writerly resolutions for 2012?











